A single leaf
Hanging bare
From a branch
In the air
A pair of eyes
Settles so
On the sight
Only they shall know
A moment of peace
A single thought
These eyes will see
In that one spot
Many come
To the exact place
Though they cannot see
Nature's same embrace
The single leaf
That time did allow
That one pair of eyes
To see somehow
Is appreciated
But not seen again
Because the one chance
Has reached its end
What do you think of this poem? Please comment on what you think the meaning is or how you reacted after reading it. I would really like to know how people percieve my personal poetry. Thanks!
(I think the meanigng is as follows: The time you have is only once, and you should appreciate the little things because you can only experience it once; and sometimes it is only you who can experience it.)
So, yes. Please leave your opinion in your comments! Thanks! =)
7 comments:
I love it, Rachel! I believe it to mean that everybody sees the world differently. Someone can look at the same thing someone else is looking at and not see what the other person is seeing at all.
I understand what you mean Marianne. And, um,....were you talking to someone named Rachel? My name is Rose.....
Eek! This is the best poem ever, Rose, it's so inspirational and wonderful! You've got talent, and imagination, and many of the world's best authors have done amazing with those traits. Love it!
This is awesome! It think it means that you should treasure every little moment:)
Aw, thanks guys! Great meaning Milli! I really like that! And thanks Kirthi! I love your super nice comments!!! =)
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